I was pretty happy with my previous layout, the main issues involved readability and making it clear what order the reader should view the information. Now, all the text boxes are the same size and aligned in the center of the page, with the relevant images on either side of the text. I also did away with the image captions which were deemed "extraneous" in the previous critique.
9.02.2008
Presentation Layout 2
I was pretty happy with my previous layout, the main issues involved readability and making it clear what order the reader should view the information. Now, all the text boxes are the same size and aligned in the center of the page, with the relevant images on either side of the text. I also did away with the image captions which were deemed "extraneous" in the previous critique.
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Jimmy does a great job of keeping the backgroud apparent, but subtle. The words are organized in a way that's easy to understand, and the high quality pictures are great examples of concrete. The pictures are not too big or small, and there is a good balance in terms of space use between the words and pictures.
The layout is great. The pictures and the paragraphs line up well and it is clear to which pictures they are referring to. The picture quality is clear and they are all a good size.
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